Talk:Senser
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![]() | The contents of the Heitham Al-Sayed page were merged into Senser on 12 November 2022. For the contribution history and old versions of the redirected page, please see its history; for the discussion at that location, see its talk page. |
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[edit]Link to J Barrett is not the same guy who is in Senser. Not even close!!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.145.75.184 (talk) 14:56, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
NOTE that the song is called "States of mind" but the demo is called "State of mind" (singular rather than plural). THIS IS NOT A TYPO!!
I changed the quoting about a bit, and attempted to obey Wikipedia's bizarre rule of 'splitting the difference' between US-style and UK-style quoting, whilst still keeping the thing vaguely readable (unlike the awful mess it was left in before). Also changed all single quotes to double, to keep things consistent. --Lezek
Did IBM use the senser track states of mind?
[edit]Can anyone tell me more about the IBM thing - did they use the senser track states of mind?
- The wording on that passage is misleading -- it was a demoscene production (in other words, a few guys programming neat computer effects and setting it to music -- usually the music is original, but in that particular demo they used "States of Mind" instead). I'll fix it. neckro 23:26, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)
Cheers for the answer re the use of states of mind, didn't think I'd ever get it but better late than never, do you know where to get hold of the demo that has states of mind in it.
- The external link in the article has a download link. neckro 20:20, 17 Dec 2004 (UTC)
POV
[edit]I added the POV tag. The article is littered with opinionated fancruft - it reads more like a teenage fansite than an encyclopedic article. Can someone please improve matters. Thank you,
Derek R Bullamore (talk) 19:52, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
I'd second that. I'd also like to request that it be rewritten in the present tense, as the band are, as their 'active dates' correctly indicate, still in existence (and, as far as I'm aware, never took a hiatus, nor split), so why the passive voice...?! I'd do it myself, but I'd only feck it up... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Margolotta (talk • contribs) 19:48, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
- I third that. First thing that annoyed me while reading were "mum" and "dad". This article needs to be rewritten. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 46.253.186.82 (talk) 18:01, 18 February 2023 (UTC)
Merger proposal
[edit]I propose merging Heitham Al-Sayed into Senser. His page has been tagged as undersourced for 13 years and as possibly non-notable for over two years. There's nothing about him that would satisfy Wikipedia's notably guidelines for musicians: rather than deleting the page, it would make sense to turn it into a redirect. ~dom Kaos~ (talk) 13:19, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
Merger complete. Klbrain (talk) 12:41, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
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